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Writing Workshop: Sisterhood

Posted by on Jul 29, 2010 in Creative Writing, Writing, Writing Workshop | 27 comments

Welcome back to your Writing Workshop.

At the bottom of this post you’ll find the widget to link up your posts. It’s open till Sunday so don’t worry if you haven’t had chance to join in just yet – there’s lots more time.

I’ve chosen prompt number one – write a post celebrating sisterhood.

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For my beautiful sister in the dollhouse.

I wonder what you see,
when you look at us?
Two women drowning in a sea of coffee cups and chaos.
Our earnest conversation punctuated with
exasperated sighs and shouts,
crisps and crumbs in aromatic air and hair.

I wonder if you listen to our whispered woes
and see the looks that pass between our tired eyes.
Our hands may well be wiping mouths and soothing brows,
but if you watch you may well see
their briefest squeeze
and something unsaid hang there in the space between.

I wonder if you squint and tilt your head a bit you’ll see
our twenty shared years fall like crayons to the floor
to leave two pale, determined, smiling girls,
still too thin and loud and free of mind,
our arms wrapped tight around each other’s fragile hearts.
Not letting go.

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So now it’s your turn. What prompt did you choose?

1. Write a post celebrating sisterhood: a friend, a blood-sister, or someone that feels like one.
- Inspired by English Mum’s beautiful post on love, sisterhood and friendship. Go read and take up her pledge.

2. “Why I want a ………..” – fill in the blank!
- Inspired by Two Become Four who was lusting after a new iPhone last week.

3. All’s well that ends well. Tell us about a difficult journey that ended with a positive resolution..
- Inspired by Little Mummy Erica’s moving story of her relationship with her Dad.

4. Tell me your worst habit(s).
- Inspired by Keep Calm and Eat Cake who’s been trying to break some of hers this week.

And finally, the last prompt is just one word. This should allow you a bit more creative freedom if you feel like taking the safety harness that particular week.

5. Found
- Inspired by Deer Baby’s post Finders Keepers

Leave your name and the URL to your post in the MckLinky below (the URL should be to your post not just to your blog) and leave me a comment to let me know you’ve taken part. If you have the time it would be great if you could try and read and comment on at least two other entries. And be kind! It’s supposed to be a bit of fun – we’re not looking for the next Booker Prize winner here.

If you haven’t had chance to respond yet, then you’ve still got till Sunday to enter your link! Or just wait till next week, when there’ll be five brand new prompts to get you thinking.

This Writing Workshop is brought to you in association with Mama Kat’s Losin’ It – who’s lovely author came up with the concept and runs her own workshop over in the U.S.

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  • http://www.blipfoto.com/dollhouse MarianneLucyIzzy

    Sat here slaving over a PhD chapter and this was just such a lovely thing to read, have tears in my eyes now!! Love you XXXXX

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    porridgebrain Reply:

    Love you too lady. So glad you and a certain other Peach Melba loving friend liked it ;) xx

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  • http://twitter.com/BritMumInNZ @BritMumInNZ

    So tenderly beautiful, vivid and thought provoking. Love this x

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    porridgebrain Reply:

    Thank you. I'm so glad :)

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  • http://deerbaby.blogspot.com deer baby

    What a lovely poem. Love the bit about 'falling like crayons to the floor' and 'the aromatic air and hair.' Vivid and perfect. I can't do poetry to save my life.

    I'm deep in novel writing at the moment – snatching every spare second my children don't need me – so I'm having to sit out workshops for a while. But thank you again for using one of mine as a springing off point.

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    porridgebrain Reply:

    Ooh good luck with the novel! Wow I would be the first out to buy that. You are made for this! x

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  • http://www.susankmann.co.uk Susan Mann

    What a beautiful peice. So well put and brings back so many memories of my childhood. x

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    porridgebrain Reply:

    Thank you Susan. We have so many memories shared me and my friend. It's lovely having someone like that x

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  • http://intensedebate.com/profiles/keatsbabe keatsbabe

    Lovely – I too think the image of the crayons is incredibly evocative. Reading it aloud is a pleasure. Thanks!

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    porridgebrain Reply:

    Thank you! I'm so glad you read it aloud! I think all poetry should come with specific instructions for it to be read out loud – you only get half the picture reading it on a page ;)

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  • http://intensedebate.com/people/Sandy_Calico Sandy_Calico

    Beautiful. That is just what it's like with good friends x

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    porridgebrain Reply:

    Thank you Sandy. Yes, I am very lucky to have her in my life :)

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  • http://intensedebate.com/profiles/greatttt gaelikaa

    How chaotic is motherhood! How crazy is life! Great celebratory poem. Well done again, Josie!

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    porridgebrain Reply:

    Thank you! Yes, we do chaos rather well, my friend and I, with our three terrors! Makes life good fun though.

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  • http://intensedebate.com/profiles/christinemosler christinemosler

    Beautiful. Clever woman. xxx

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    porridgebrain Reply:

    Thank you special lady. You rock xx

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  • http://intensedebate.com/profiles/livileah88 Livi

    Another incredible poem! I feel the need to go and people watch!

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    porridgebrain Reply:

    Oh you should! And then come back and write poems about them! I actually made that a little side project for a time – it was great fun!

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  • http://twitter.com/burntsienna1 @burntsienna1

    lovely, josie, just lovely. :)

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    porridgebrain Reply:

    Thank you lovely :) x

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  • http://intensedebate.com/profiles/everyusernameitrieddidnotworkletsseeifthisonedoes grandadslilsamm

    What a lovely poem :)

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    porridgebrain Reply:

    Thank you!

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  • http://intensedebate.com/profiles/jfb57 jfb57

    What an unusual take on the prompt! You have written a beautiful piece here – excellent!:)

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    porridgebrain Reply:

    Thank you honey! Most importantly my friend loved it so that made me happy :)

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  • http://intensedebate.com/profiles/darkpurplemoon darkpurplemoon

    Hello, I have just posted my first piece of creative writing for ages – prompted by you and Judiths room. Thank you so much for providing this space.

    I will go and read some others now as well.

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    porridgebrain Reply:

    Hello! It's good to meet you! Thanks for joining in. Will look forward to reading your post when I get some time to read through them all. Hope to see you back again soon!

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  • mthatshelwa

    great piece creative art i am inspired

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