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Writing Workshop: Found

Posted by on Jun 17, 2010 in Uncategorized | 23 comments

Welcome back to your Writing Workshop!

At the bottom of this post you’ll find the widget to link up your posts and always I can’t wait to read as many as I can. Thank you to everyone taking part.

First of all though, it’s my turn. I’ve chosen prompts number 2 – an event that restored my faith in something. I don’t want to explain this one too much though, it would spoil it. I want it just to be. It is about inspiration, and faith, and connection. Let’s leave it at that…

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Found

I lie covered in leaves in muddy dark.
Two jagged sprays of oaks for eyes, one bright
and oval, gently rippled beech for mouth.
My heartbeat pulsing with the ground beneath,
an echo of the life below and in
and all around. In branching, sucking root,
and creeping vine, burrowing worm and
dormant seed. Hidden, like me, from light but not
from life, connected to that tangled web.

So safe and warm it is, my peaty bed,
but lonely too, with only whispers soft
of secret, scuttling things to share my dreams.
A sense of something missing, felt, but still
unseen: a longing for a kindred soul.
And yearning fingers start to creep and crawl
their way through dirt and stone, in hope of reaching
something living feeling breathing, just like me,
to cling to in the dark, to take root in.

Surprise. As rough and hard transforms to smooth
and soft, yielding to my fingers with their own.
I turning comprehend our bed was laid
for two, companions in our solitude.
A face, as soft as rain with eyes as blue
as stars meets mine, with lips of apple leaves
to press to mine, just for a moment, till
we deem to rise, up and out, into the sun.
Our roots still joined together, intertwined.

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Photo Credit: futureancient ‘Sensitive Space’

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So now it’s your turn. What prompt did you choose?

1. What qualities or traits do you think your children have inherited from you, you partner, or even from your extended family?
- Inspired by this gorgeous photo taken by Mummy Musings: Like Father, Like Daughter.

2. Write about an event that restored your faith in something.
- Inspired by From Marketing to Milk and a dream that restored her belief (just a little bit).

3. What’s your magical power? Or what would you like it to be?
- Inspired by the Moiderer and her lovely post about being a magic mummy.

4. Tell us about a time when you didn’t feel welcome.
- Inspired by Notes from Lapland and her reflections on whether England is Child Unfriendly.

And finally, the last prompt now is going to be just one word. This should allow you a bit more creative freedom if you feel like taking the safety harness that particular week.

5. Your word for the week is: She
- Inspired by the beautiful poem on Life Slightly Used’s blog this week.

Leave your name and the URL to your post in the MckLinky below (the URL should be to your post not just to your blog) and leave me a comment to let me know you’ve taken part. If you have the time it would be great if you could try and read and comment on at least two other entries. And be kind! It’s supposed to be a bit of fun – we’re not looking for the next Booker Prize winner here.

If you haven’t had chance to respond yet, then you’ve still got till Sunday to enter your link! Or just wait till next week, when there’ll be five brand new prompts to get you thinking.

This Writing Workshop is brought to you in association with Mama Kat’s Losin’ It – who’s lovely author came up with the concept and runs her own workshop over in the U.S.

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  • http://intensedebate.com/profiles/jfb57 jfb57

    A beautiful picture & beautiful words which I think I understand the meaning of. I have read it 3 times & just love the words you have used even if I am not entirely sure I fully get the meaning! Hope that's OK!

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    porridgebrain Reply:

    Sometimes poetry is just supposed to be felt, not understood so much. That's what I love about it. So of course that's OK!

    Thanks.

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  • http://typecast2000.blogspot.com Nickie@Typecast

    Interesting poem, Josie – obviously very personal – I love the last line x

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    porridgebrain Reply:

    Yeah, it is a bit personal. Hence obtuseness. Glad you like it though, thank you :)

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  • http://www.susankmann.co.uk Susan Mann

    Lovely poem, you have such a way with word. Lovely picture to go with it. xx

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    porridgebrain Reply:

    It's a perfect photo isn't it? Was so glad to find it. Thank you lovely x

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  • http://intensedebate.com/profiles/amodernmilitarymother amodernmilitarymother

    Hi Josie, A really beautiful poem. I have posted my 'I hate housework' post in the writer's workshop. You are really leading the push in blogging. It's so inspiring – thank you for doing so. aMMM xx

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    porridgebrain Reply:

    Such a lovely, lovely thing to say. Thank YOU. Really made my day this xxx

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  • http://intensedebate.com/profiles/colourfulcoach colourfulcoach

    Wow – that is SO beautiful – you have the heart and soul of a poet xxx

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    porridgebrain Reply:

    Thank you Cathy. You are very kind x

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  • http://mwaonline.blogspot.com Mwa

    Ah. Pretty.
    (Told you not to expect brilliance. :-) )

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    porridgebrain Reply:

    Even that is appreciated from you lovely. Thank you :)

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  • http://intensedebate.com/profiles/greatttt gaelikaa

    I could find layers of meaning here, and a lot of beautiful metaphors. I could feel the power and magic all right. Poetry is definitely your forte.

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    porridgebrain Reply:

    Thank you so much. Power and magic was what this was all about :)

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  • http://intensedebate.com/people/melissamashburn melissamashburn

    Hi again! I did two of the writing prompts, the one using the word She and the one that is about our children's inheritance

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    porridgebrain Reply:

    Thanks for taking part Melissa!

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  • http://deerbaby.blogspot.com deer baby

    Bloody hell that was brilliant. x Honest to god. Or whomsoever.

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    porridgebrain Reply:

    Thanks. Whomsoever is more like it :)

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  • http://intensedebate.com/profiles/ mrsljhall

    I feel as though I can swim in your poems sometimes :o )

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    porridgebrain Reply:

    What a wonderful thing to say! Thank you.

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  • http://www.wifeoutwest.blogspot.com/ Wifeoutwest

    Gorgeous. I can hear the wind in the rhythm. I love it.

    I've joined in. I'm new. This is ACE.

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  • http://twitter.com/itsamummyslife @itsamummyslife

    A very late entry. Just needed to write this.

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  • http://intensedebate.com/profiles/livileah88 Livi

    Another incredible piece from you, I have no idea what it's about but I've read it again and again and I just love it. It makes me pause and lose myself in the words.

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